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SC449 - BELLE (Make It Funny) by simpleCOMICS

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Hello, I am Ang-Jojo and I will be doing a Critique for you! this comic is a nice one, I believe It is a template-like version since there are no text in the speech bubble, am i right? Said in the description is that these two characters are in a stare-off kind of competition. What I think looking at the art is that they look like frenimies, so the face expression is done well. :) Since they are kind of frenimies not showing emotions and just staring at each other is a perfect way to show it. the 3rd picture, showing no dialoge, make the silence obvious, so people will know that they are either thinking, or they are just too angry that they cannot speak.
Though mostly this comic is good, I think that maybe, just maybe, the characters should have a slightly different expression in each picture, to make this comic a slightly more exciting one
This is an exciting comic, and I cannot wait to see the comic when the text in filled in!
Thank you for reading,
Ang-Jojo
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simpleCOMICS Dec 25, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thank you so much for the critique! I appreciate the feedback and I too can't wait to see what folks come up with! :D
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BrightenYourSmile Dec 25, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Welcome! I can't wait!!! :iconhappyhappyplz:
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